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Post by raegan on Nov 19, 2009 0:25:26 GMT -5
* they don't stand a chance ,ZACKARY HASTINGS . 735 WORDS . CLOTHES . COMPLETE THIS WAS A SUPER SUCKY STARTER. I'M SO SORRY =\
SUDDENLY, Rae could not believe that she had turned down a date to be sitting in a club alone. She could have been having dinner with someone that she was really starting to like, but instead, she was in the Lotus Nightclub, desperately searching for her companion, Abby. That girl had asked Rae to join her on a night out as the pair hadn't been around each other in a long time. She had been beginning to wish that she had suggested a night in with movies. She was already tired of the loud atmosphere and the desperate men who seemed to be looking her up and down. Rae was not that type of girl, so she did her best to ignore the eyes on her as she moved through the crowd to the bar in one last desperate attempt to find Abby. Scanning the bar, Rae saw no one familiar and sighed to herself. This was not the night she had hoped for. She ran her fingers through her head, wrinkling her nose at the slight dampness she felt in places. It was hot in here, enough to cause a light sweat, especially with all the bodies moving against each other, others practically fucking each other against a wall. The seventeen year old rolled her eyes and moved off towards the dancefloor, ready to push her way through to the back of the club to claim one of the many empty couches that lined the back wall.
NUMEROUS hands reached out to touch her as she squeezed through the mass of bodies. More than once she'd had to push a rather persistent hand off her body before shuddering and continuing. She was pretty hot and bothered by the time she reached the back and could us some kind of drink. A club was an unfortunate place for Rae because she didn't drink. Before sitting, she scanned the back of the room, still with no sign of Abby. I give up, she thought to herself, while sighing audibly. She was done. Planting herself on the couch, she pulled her phone out of the pocket of her jacket, ready to call Carter, seeing if he could pick her up. She could still try and make up her missed night with him. Lately, she had been having more and more fun in his company. The more they learned about each other, the more comfortable they became around each other and the more Rae wanted to learn about him. It was a vicious cycle and she could see herself becoming trapped within it. She didn't know what it was about him that kept her interested, but whatever it was, she was hooked on it. Rae wouldn't go as far to say that she loved him or whatever. It was nowhere near that. She was just waiting to see what could come of her few dates with Carter.
THE text was half-finished when she shoved her phone in her pocket. It wasn't worth it. She would just sit around for a while and go into work early. She had the things she needed there, as there was only so much she needed to bring in with her to the club. She didn't drink, so money wasn't necessary. The only other thing besides her cell phone that she had was her fake ID. It was the reason that a seventeen year old such as herself could do what she did without any questions asked. She stifled a yawn, needing to do something to keep her awake. She was quickly growing bored, so she decided to stand and continue her search for Abby. She stood, stretched and reluctantly headed by for the dancefloor. She didn't bother calling out because her call wouldn't go more than a few people along before it was swallowed by the loud music that was pumping. After a few moments, she found herself being bumped with the force of a small crowd to her right. She was knocked off balance and crashed straight into someone ( a solid someone she noticed ), and hit the floor with a rather dull 'thud' which wasn't heard by anyone but herself. She groaned softly as her tail bone ached. She would be fine. It was a minor pain and would fade quickly. "Sorry!" she said loudly to the person she had bumped into, finally making the effort to rise to her feet.
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Post by bryan on Nov 19, 2009 19:21:18 GMT -5
( TAGGED: raegan parker LOCATION: lotus night club APPEARANCE: outfit ) the day wasn't going so good tonight. first off, he didn't know any people to talk to or worse to seduce to. maybe this is a sign of giving up on his childish games and be a changed man or something. he haven't had sex for about a month now and maybe this is a sign from someone, asking zackary to stop with his games and maybe this time he should listen for once. so, that's what he might do starting today. well, actually starting next week or something because tonight has some beautiful ladies for him to play with. zackary was looking around the building and he didn't found no one that he could play a game with. he wanted a drink so badly that he walked over to the bar and order a glass of vodka with no ice. once after he got his drink, he wanted to walk around the building and see if there is any fishes in the building and still had no one to play with, even though some girls wanted to but wasn't his type. so, he sat down on one of the stool over by the bar and just sit there like a good boy and just waited for the day to end while taking some sips from his drink. once after he was done, he order another with the same one he asked before.
zackary got his drink and just continued taking some sips. then, he had his blue eyes on someone. he got off the stool and placed the glass on top of the counter as he didn't felt like taking it with him. he walked over to the dance floor to see if she needed any help looking for someone. as he was approaching her, the crowd was beginning to close tight, closing the gap that he enter, and was surrounded with people dancing. he then felt someone bumping into him and heard a 'thud' hitting down the floor. he turned around and look down, helping the girl up from the floor and was wondering if she was okay. he heard her saying something, but didn't quite hear her because the music was too loud that it was surrounding his ears. i'm sorry, what?! he asked, wondering what she said to him. zackary looked at the girl and noticed that she was quite a cutie. he had a smile on his smile while looking at her. hi! my name is zackary! he said, introducing himself to the girl. the music was quite loud and the crowd was surrounding them that they could barely move. wanna get out of this dangerous crowd?! he asked offering, taking her hand and walking her out of the crowd and off the dance floor to somewhere that was safe. once they got out of the dance floor, he looked at the girl and said, now, it's much better. are you okay? that look like that hurt badly. i'm sorry, it was my fault. i should have look where i was going. he added, apologizing to the girl.
( COMMENTS: sorry for the sucky post and sorry if it looks short. ) [/font]
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Post by raegan on Nov 21, 2009 20:34:13 GMT -5
* they don't stand a chance ,ZACKARY HASTINGS . 687 WORDS . CLOTHES . COMPLETE AND THIS ONE WASN'T MUCH BETTER. SORRY =\
SHE suddenly felt very lucky that she had opted not to wear the dress she was going to wear. That would have been embarrassing. However, in the long tights she was wearing, nothing was revealed as she hit the ground. It was significantly less mortifying that way. Once to her feet, she took a moment to rub her hip, no way near comfortable with herself to try and ease the pain where it actually existed. Within moments her hands were removed altogether. She was completely fine. It wasn't like she hadn't ever fallen over. When she was still learning to dance in six inch heels, she had fallen over more times than she cared to admit. It had been a highly embarrassing, highly painful, experience, but she had gotten through it. One fall in front of a rather cute guy would not destory her self-esteem. Besides, she had no real reason to want to impress him. There was Carter to think about. However, she had no real ties to him, so she could flirt with cute stranger should she choose to. As she had about an hour before she had to leave, she chose to. The smile on the guys face was enough to convince her of that. He looked young, which was definitely a plus. However, she had no doubt that he was still older than she. Every body in this town seemed to be older than she was.
HIS lips appeared to be moving, but Rae could not hear a word he was saying. The music was definitely overwhelming her and she had not yet adjusted to it. She shook her head and pointed to her ear, hoping he'd get the hint that she was unable to hear a word he was saying. He continued to speak, and she gave up. She was about to turn and walk away when suddenly her hand was in his and he was leading her off the dancefloor. The sudden movement caught her offguard, but she said nothing. It was just hand holding. It was no big deal. However, Rae became aware of what guys usually had in mind when they came to clubs and talked to girls who appeared to be alone. Oh Abby, where are you? Part of her was hoping her telepathic message would reach her older friend and she would make a reappearance. Nothing. Moments later, she realised she was making assumptions. This guy could just want to talk to her. There was nothing wrong with that. "Good idea," she said to him with a smile, referring to him leading them out of the crowd. She could hear what he was saying now, which was a definite plus. However, his words did make her way to simultaneously laugh and blush.
THE laugh seemed the better option, and that was just what she did. She laughed and just shrugged. "I've had worse. I'm fine though. Thanks. I guess I'm just no fight for the crowd." The apology was next and Rae wished that he would have just skipped it. It wasn't his fault that the crowd had decided to push her into him. It was just an accident. No one was to blame. She waved her hand at him in a dismissive way, though she was still smiling. "No, it's fine. It wasn't your fault. That crowd is just a danger to anyone in it." Now that most of the formalities were out of the way, Rae relaxed. If she drank, she probably would've ordered something strong and downed about half of it. As she didn't, she took advantage of the company she now had. It was better than sitting by herself, or going to work an hour early and not getting paid for it. "I'm Rae." She held out her hand as she introduced herself to him, unaware that he had already tried to start up the introduction stage. It wasn't her fault the music had overwhelmed her and she wasn't able to hear. It was a lot quieter here and a lot safer. The music was still loud, but conversation was able to be carried out.
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Post by bryan on Nov 22, 2009 4:50:27 GMT -5
( TAGGED: raegan parker LOCATION: lotus night club APPEARANCE: outfit ) maybe zackary was lucky for wearing this party outfit that he barely decided on wearing for tonight. he normally wouldn't wear this type of hat and the scarf, but tonight it was calling him that he needed to wear something if he wanted to get someone's attention. surprisingly, it work because he met someone in the night club. its a bit awkward having to meet a girl who bump into you in the middle of the dance floor and then apologizing at each other because you have nothing else to talk about. once he met the girl, he thought that she was rather cute. he normally doesn't meet a girl who bumps into him and comes for her rescue from the dangerous fighting crowd, but it looks like it could be a hobby for him whenever he's out. he wanted to have a nice conversation with her, but couldn't because of the loud music and the crowd. he heard her saying something before he took her out of the crowd and found somewhere where they can hear each other than the music. he let go of her hand and look at the girl with a smile on his face and said, you're welcome. i'm glad to help. trust me, i'm sure that nobody can't fight the dangerous crowd. he shrug his shoulders.
yeah, that's true about the crowd. they could get a little crazy sometimes. do you want a drink? my treat. he asked, offering. he feels like he's gonna start to ramble out of nowhere, so he thought about getting something to drink and figured to offer the girl as a treat. zack didn't get her name and just when he was gonna ask, she told him. it's very nice to meet you, rae. he said. he noticed that she took out her hand as she was introducing herself to him, so he shook her hand as he was being a gentlemen. after he shook her hand, he slide both of his hands inside his jean pockets and took out his arm for her to wrap her hand around and take her to the bar for something to drink. they began to start walking toward the bar and said, can i have a glass of wheat whisky with no ice. and what does the lady want to drink? he said, telling the bartender what drink he wants. he turn his head, looking at rae to see what kind of drink she wants.
( COMMENTS: again, sorry for the lame post. [/font]
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